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As for the eyes, her right needs more visible eyelashes. They are too far apart, the little circles inside the are too dark, and they are too... tall?
As for the hair, I would do some shading and add light lines of hair in the blank spots.
The ear is too short and isn't up far enough.
The shirt comes off from the body a bit too much.
That's all, and you're welcome for the critique.